I especially enjoy the metre/cadence. It is simple but very effective and is something with which I think some poets struggle. I also really like the stanza: ''You have no control, your words can't convey my spirit and soul, to file it away.'' I think it pictures the essence of feeling trapped in and breaking free of the words of others. I also like the last two lines ''Eyes open wide, and you're aware of me'' I debated exactly what they meant. I think the comma is important in their interpretation.
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